RAT BURGER

Hi and welcome to my next blog post. Today I will be posting a story about a story. This may sound weird but what we need to do is find our favourite book and then write a shorter version. My favourite book is RAT BURGER. When I was younger my teacher read it to me and my classroom. I made this into something a little different.

Once upon a time a there was a girl who had a GREAT family. They always celebrated everything until her mum died. A couple of months later her dad found another girlfriend. They got married and wanted to be together forever. The new step mum was horrible to the little girl. The little girls name is Chloe. Once her step mum came she has had a horrible life. She was walking to school when she went past her dad working. He had a surprise for Chloe. He go her a mouse. She wanted to train the mouse for a school talent show. A couple of days before the talent show her mouse died. Her step mum killed him. Then she flushed the mouse down the toilet. She then was crying in her bedroom when she saw her pant move. She grabbed her pants and found something surprising. She found another mice. The mouse could dance to music too. She decided to hide the mouse from everyone and keep it a secret till the talent show. She got up the next morning out of their apartment. She felt spit fall on her head. She looked up and there she was, Patricia Jones. Patricia Jones is the biggest bully ever. Once Chloe got to school she showed her best friend Jack her mouse. Oh no they said, the burger man is here. The burger man sells gross burgers that are sloppy and have sock juice. Chloe and Jack have always wondered what was wrong with the burger man. They followed the burger man and they found he was going into a warehouse. Chloe wondered why. “That warehouse was abandoned years ago” Jack said. They went into the ware house to find cages hanging from the ceiling. They were filled with something. RATS! He had a machine that he was chucking the mice in. He caught us and tied us to chairs. We asked what this was all about. He said he was making mice meat. We asked him if he was giving out rat burgers to our school and he replied with “YES”. We asked why he was doing this and he said “For the money”. Chloe and Jack heard someone say “Hello Honey”. Who was it? The person walked out looking at her phone. Chloe’s face dropped. It was her step mother. Chloe said to her “WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?”. The step mum looked up and said “oh hello Chloe. I am with this nice man.”. Chloe was recording everything and sent it to her dad. Her dad busted through the walls with their van. He grabbed the kids and left. Next minute the cops were here. Ratburger man was arrested as well as the step mum. The dad got married to another women a couple of years after and she was so nice to Chloe. They always played games together. That was the end of this story. THE END